如今的小学生,思维真是独特又有趣。他们的作文素材里,不仅有“妈妈双眼皮是做的”、“她的肚子像个小皮球”,还有“我爸爸在偷偷抽烟”这样的真实写照。近日,浙江一位小朋友的语文小作文在网络上走红,让我们一起来看看他笔下的爸爸抽烟故事。

这位小朋友在作文中写道:我终于发现,我的爸爸,偷偷在抽烟。我一直以为他不抽烟,直到四岁时看到别人抽烟,爸爸告诉我那是坏习惯,伤害身体,不可以学。我问爸爸,他们为什么要伤害身体?爸爸告诉我,因为没有人爱他们,有人爱的人不抽烟。我信以为真,一直到我六岁,才发现爸爸身上有烟味。他说是同事抽烟熏到他了,我再次相信。直到我八岁,才真正发现爸爸在偷偷抽烟。
他晚上在阳台上抽烟,看到我来慌忙扔掉烟头;他陪我和妹妹在花园里玩,远远躲在树后抽烟;他在我放学时去接我,等我的时候一根接一根地抽。我感到疑惑,爸爸为什么抽烟,他为什么要伤害自己的身体?难道没有人爱他吗?我感到疑惑,但这次我没有再提问。我知道,他一下班回到家就洗手漱口,肯定是又抽烟了。我悄悄告诉妈妈,妈妈却对我说爸爸不抽烟,是同事熏到他了。可我听到好几次,妈妈背着我对爸爸说,不要再抽烟了。
我再次感到疑惑,我的爸爸为什么抽烟?他为什么要伤害自己的身体?其实,我很爱他,妹妹爱他,妈妈也爱他。这份纯真的爱,让我更加困惑,也更加心疼爸爸。
然而,当这些小学生们用英文写作文时,却仿佛变成了乖宝宝。比如,英文版的“我的爸爸”是这样的:My father is 38 years old. He is tall and thin. People like him very much, because he is so kind and he always smiles. I like talking to my father. He always can teach me a lot. He is a worker, working in a company. We have weekends together and often go out for fun. Father says it’s good for us. He is a good father and also a good friend.
还有这样的描述:My father has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses, looking more gentle. His hair is not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair". Daddy does management work, but he usually doesn't talk bureaucratically to others, so his personal connections are especially good, just like me. Daddy always speaks extremely temperately, never hits or curses at people. Although sometimes he can be angry for a long time, but just only about one day, could not surpass one day-long. He usually educates me that a person must be honest, friendly to others, and work diligently. This is my father, I love him forever.
以及这样的简短描述:My father is a strong man. He has short hair and likes sports. He is good at singing. I love my father. He usually cheers me up and we often swim on vacation. That is all.

对比中英文作文,我们不难发现,英文作文中的爸爸形象更加完美、乖巧,而中文作文则更加真实、贴近生活。这或许正是中西方文化差异在小学生作文中的体现吧!