随着学期已经悄然过半,学生们积累的知识也日益丰富。为了更好地巩固和提升英语写作能力,今天,我们特别为湘教版(同“仁爱版”)八年级英语上册的学生们,精心梳理了四个单元的作文写作点拨及满分范文。这些内容不仅能够帮助老师们更好地指导学生,也能让学生们自主积累,提升写作水平。

写作点拨: 体育锻炼的重要性不言而喻,随着中考体育分值的增加,体育活动更是成为了学生们日常不可或缺的一部分。请根据以下问题提示,以“My favorite sport”为题,写一篇约80词的短文,介绍你最喜爱的体育运动。
1. 你最喜欢哪种运动?为什么?
2. 你通常在什么时候进行这项运动?
3. 你多久进行一次这项运动?
4. 你最喜欢的运动员是谁?
满分范文:
My favorite sport is table tennis. Playing table tennis not only makes me strong and healthy but also brings me a lot of joy. During breaks or after school, I often play table tennis with my classmates. Last year, I even joined our school's table tennis team and participated in several matches against other schools. Winning a game always fills us with happiness. My favorite player is Ding Ning. She is not only beautiful but also an excellent athlete. My dream is to become a table tennis player like her when I grow up.
写作点拨: 你通常如何度过闲暇时间呢?请根据表格提示,以“My free time activities”为题,写一篇约70词的短文,介绍自己的闲暇活动、频率及好处。
满分范文:
In my free time, I engage in various activities. Once a week, I go swimming at the gym, which is a great way to stay fit. Every day, when I feel tired and don't want to study, I listen to music to relax and help me finish my homework quickly. Twice a month, I visit the library to read books, which broadens my mind. Every other day after dinner, I take a walk with my mom in the park near our home, where we talk about my school life. On weekends, I sometimes play basketball with my friends, and we all enjoy the excitement of playing together. What about you? What do you usually do in your free time?
写作点拨: 假如你是李明,你们学校上周五举行了一次运动会。请根据内容提示,给你加拿大的笔友David写一封电子邮件,告诉他有关运动会的情况。内容需包括运动会的举办地点、参与情况、你参加的项目及结果,以及你从运动会中学到的内容。
满分范文:
Dear David,
I'm writing to share with you something about our school sports meet. Last Friday, our school held a sports meet on the playground. Many students from my class took part in various events. Li Jun, who is good at the high jump, participated and won first place. As for me, I joined the 100-meter race and although I didn't win, I learned a lot from the experience. I realized the importance of perseverance and teamwork. The sports meet not only strengthened our bodies but also enhanced our friendship and team spirit. I hope you can also have such an enjoyable experience in your school.

Yours,
Li Ming